Dark Eyed Pixie

this is a really good start! In a few lines you have me hooked, I raelly want to know what happened! Could I possibly imagine his beautiful Scottish accent that ...

I like his persistance and her annoyance, although if some random guy put his hand on my leg I would slap him. That's just me though :D “How do I ...

I kept my steady pace , my boots tapp ing lightly on the cobblestones. My long coat billowed while I passed others on the street. I pulled it closer around ...

I really like how you described melanie. It's a really good bit of writing. Her gorgeous hazel eyes melted the hearts of many, and her sky-high bronzed legs left every ...

Hiya, Review time :D Okey dokey, here we go:(I apologize in advance if my bolds are broken :roll: ) All of this was my fault. (I like this it makes ...

Right typo's: Pointed out. Great, all I have to do is tell you how awesome it was. It was awesome. Seriously, it's really great that you've made it personal, but ...

You added in more Jack, I'm now very, very happy “Exactly. And I care on whether I’ve hurt those feelings or not.” He is so sweet, I hope he does ...

First review! Thought I ought to return the favour, since you were nice enough to review mine! As I stood looking at the surrounding forest, a shiver worked its way ...

JACOB: [is vibrating] I shall change into a werewolf! [to himself] Wait, what am I going to about Bella? I guess I should drive her- Vibrating, hehe BELLA: [faints] ALICE: ...

Hiya, ok review time! Everyone else has pointed out the mistakes, but I found this one teensy one. He was the most gorgeous man in history and the best photographer ...

Oh, darn, all the mistakes seem to be pointed out. I guess I'll just have to tell you what I thought of it. *sigh* If I really have to. It ...

Hiya, Right, review time! Now I as well as you would love to think that he’d seen the error of his ways and was now a new man but we ...

I got a little confused when I was reading this, I liked this though. There's something in it that makes me want to not stop reading, if that makes any ...

Ten minutes? wow This is really great, I wasn't quite sure how you could continue this, but I'm really glad you did! “I disagree. You’re still are an idiot,” she ...

........ wow. That was just...... wow. I can't think of any other way to describe it. There was just one tiny thing I found. It might just be me being ...